Our Six Traits Writing-Ideas |
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We have been studying the 6 Traits in our writing class. Mrs. Boeye, our school writing consultant, comes in to help us to improve our writing.
We have been working on the trait: Ideas.
Please enjoy our stories. We worked very hard on Ideas, Topic, and Detail in our stories.
Hi, my name is Aranisha King and I live in Rock Island, IL. I live with my Mom and Dad and Grandma. I have 4 sisters and one brother. My older sister is thirteen, she goes to Edison Jr. High, and her name is Markesha. Then comes me, I am 12 years old; I am one year younger than my sister. Next come my two twin sisters their names are Shakera and Shakayla. They are good sometimes but they act a like. The youngest is my little brother; his name is Lolo that is what we call him. I go to Earl Hanson School. I've been going to Earl Hanson for three years I have a lot of friends in my school. I think Earl Hanson is the best school. My favorite subject in school is Math because you can learn a lot about numbers in Math. My favorite candy is Bubble Gum it is my favorite, because it lasts for a long time. My favorite color is green. I like it because it is everywhere.
Hi! My name is Alyssia Holliday. I went to Earl Hanson my whole life. My favorite sport is basketball, because I like to play on a team. I have one brother and one sister. My favorite color is baby blue, because it is the color of my sisterâs car. I have two dogs and one is a boy and one is a girl. The boyâs name is Snoops and the girlâs name is Momma.
All About Me
My favorite game is Play Station 2. I like it because it can play a DVD. The game I like best is Max Pain. My favorite food is pizza. I like pizza because it is good. My favorite kind of pizza is pepperoni. My favorite school is Earl Hanson. I like this school because it is fun. My best subject is math, I really like to use money in class.
By Johnnie
Hi! My name is Crystal. I went to Butterworth School in Moline for two years. We have three cars at our home! I like pizza from Hungry Howies. I like Butterworth School better then Earl Hanson because I had more friends there. I have three brothers and four sisters. I get to help the younger students with their reading. That is fun.
Learn Something About Me
My favorite state is Pennsylvania, because my sister lives there. I love the color blue as you can tell; most of my clothes are blue. Bishops is my favorite restaurant because I like their food bar. The eighth month of the year is my favorite month, because my birthday is that month. Dogs are my favorite animals; I especially like a toy Collie. I might get one this summer.
By: Jon
Hi! My name is Kyle Smith. I like to play games like Max's Pane. We got new siding this year. My dad's brother put the new siding up. He works at Suburban Construction. The siding is baby blue, my mom likes that color. I think football is boring sometimes. When I need help I ask Johnnie. My favorite restaurant is Rudy's I like their tacos, because they are good. Yum Yum!
I was born on November 6, 1989, at Trinity Hospital. Two days later I went home to the city of Rock Island and have been living here ever since. Second of all I like to watch movies but my favorite movies are Scary Movie 1 and 2. I go to the movie theatre all the time. It is fun to watch movies there. One thing I really hate are cats. Some cats don't like me and some do.I'm going to tell you a story about cats. I was 5 years old and a cat attacked me and scratched me all up and ever since that happened I hated cats. Finally the reason I fight so much is I get tired of being picked on and I lose my temper and beat the kid up, I know that I will get into trouble, but I can't stop.
By: Roger
All About Remita
I was born in Milwaukee, when we moved from Milwaukee I came to school in Rock Island. I attended Long Fellow School. After awhile I changed from that school, then I went to Grant. Next, I came to Earl Hanson School. I really like school because it is fun and I have lots of friends. My favorite TV show is Bet, because I like the music. My Mom's name is Barbara, she is a nurse. Sometimes she takes some days off of work to spend time with her kids who she loves the most. I love to listen to music; my favorite singer is Bow Wow.
I like sports, especially basketball. I am good at shooting baskets. My car is red, it has red seats and I like to ride in it. My mom is living in Peoria, because she did some bad things. We live with my grand-ma; I have 1 sister and 2 brothers. My favorite jewelry is a necklace that my best friend gave to me, when she moved away.
All About Me
My father's name is Tom Lee Dillie, that is where I got my name. I was born on September 29, 1990. I live in an apartment, it is small. My brother and I share a room, sometimes we fight. I like all kinds of sports. My favorites are football and basketball. I have gone to school at Earl Hanson since EDR. I have lots of friends.
Hi! meet me Michael. I like to watch TV. My favorite kinds of shows are Pokemon, and Dragons Ball Z. I watch it after my homework. I have a dog it is big. His name Naka, he is a Rotweiler he is nice. My most favorite subject is art. I like to draw pictures and color. I would like to introduce my three best friends; they are Patrick, Thomas, and Jon. Jon and Patrick are 6th graders and Thomas in 5th. My favorite teacher is Ms. Schoening, I know she can be mean, but she is nice. We do have fun sometimes.
By Michael
I was born in Rock Island. My birthday is May 3,1990. There are four kids that are in my family. I have a lot of family. Some live here and some don't. My Mom's name is Terica Hope Mentria. My dad's name is RJ, Jr. My Mom died on my birthday. She had promised to take me to see Big Bird for a birthday present. When my grand-ma was going to get my cake from Hy-Vee, my mom's house was on fire. I though that my party was going to be a fun party, but it was not fun, but I thank God that my little brother was not in the fire. What I like to do in my free time is teach my little brother how to do his math. In school my favorite subject is math. I like to work with money. I play on the Hanson basketball team, I'm a guard. I like to play basketball because I wanted to follow my older brother to basketball all the time. I love learning how to play basketball. My brother taught me how to play basketball.
By: Xenobia
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